refinements

Author: hpk42

webxdc.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ a decentralized secure web app eco-system without servers, coins or chains.
 
 ## How webxdc works  
 
-webxdc apps use existing chat groups (instead of web servers) to communicate with each other, with roughly this technical work flow: 
+webxdc apps use existing chat groups (instead of web servers) to communicate with each other, with roughly this initial technical work flow: 
 
 1. Send a message to a chat with an webxdc app (archive or bundled html) as attachment. 
 
@@ -14,6 +14,8 @@ webxdc apps use existing chat groups (instead of web servers) to communicate wit
 
 3. webxdc apps can not reach the internet themselves and rather can only send "app-state" update message to other app users in the chat group.
 
+While this describes an already working "proof of concept" usage there are already a lot of further reaching discussions. However, we prefer to avoid "early over-generalizing" and rather evolve further mechanisms and features from real-world needs, especially from people living in precarious contexts with bad networks and affected by internet outages.  
+
 
 ## Benefits to users of webxdc apps 
 
@@ -22,11 +24,12 @@ webxdc apps use existing chat groups (instead of web servers) to communicate wit
 - no need for logins, accounts or discovery mechanisms because apps start and run privately 
   from an existing social chat context 
 
-- privacy by protocol: leaking of content or metadata from app usage virtually impossible
+- privacy by protocol: leaking of content or metadata from app usage
+  virtually impossible. No need for annoying GDPR or cookie consent dialogues. 
 
-- webxdc app messaging is also e2e-encrypted by default and there is no
-  way to read or collect app state information, not even by webxdc app developers 
-  because apps can not contact anyone outside the chat
+- webxdc app messaging is e2e-encrypted by default and there is no
+  way to read or collect app state information, not even by webxdc developers 
+  because their apps can not contact anyone outside the chat. 
 
 - no need to think about creating or representing yourself as a wallet :)
 
@@ -35,7 +38,7 @@ webxdc apps use existing chat groups (instead of web servers) to communicate wit
 
 webxdc empowers FOSS developments in unprecedented ways: 
 
-- just use all the existing JS/html5 libraries and designs of your choice
+- well-known paradim: use all the existing JS/html5 libraries and designs of your choice
 - quick onboarding: only a handful API methods to learn 
 - serverless (but really): no worrying about hosting a server or configuring DNS, AWS etc 
 - permissionless: no worrying about registering at app stores for distribution