(DOCSP-17931): Added Atlas connection string note. #5755
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Hey @corryroot , so I think the direction we want to go with this ticket is make this less like an Atlas CTA and instead more naturally integrate Atlas-specific content into the page. My suggestion would be to add a fourth tab in the Examples section of the page for Atlas, where we maybe show a sample connection string and how to find it in Atlas. |
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Thanks for the updates @corryroot. Just have a couple more thoughts on language / formatting.
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My suggestion would be to not make this a note and just have it be regular in-line copy. That might help this flow a bit more naturally.
| The MongoDB Atlas UI provides the connection strings for | ||
| you when you :atlas:`connect to a database deployment |
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Saying Atlas provides the connection strings when I connect to a database deployment is a little confusing to me. Don't I need the connection string to connect to the deployment? Maybe we can say something like:
MongoDB Atlas provides connection strings for your deployment when you click the
:atlas:`Connect </connect-to-database-deployment/>` button in the Atlas UI.
Feel free to tweak this.
| :mdbacct:`MongoDB Atlas registration page | ||
| </register?tck=docs_atlas>`. | ||
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Suggest providing a little context for this code-block. Maybe we can precede it with something like:
"Your Atlas connection string may resemble the following: "
| </connect-to-database-deployment/>` button in the Atlas UI. | ||
| To register a new Atlas account, start at the | ||
| :mdbacct:`MongoDB Atlas registration page | ||
| </register?tck=docs_atlas>`. |
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Since this is in the manual, can we use docs_server?
| </register?tck=docs_atlas>`. | |
| </register?tck=docs_server>`. |
| </connect-to-database-deployment/>` button in the Atlas UI. | ||
| To register a new Atlas account, start at the | ||
| :mdbacct:`MongoDB Atlas registration page | ||
| </register?tck=docs_atlas>`. |
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Can we also add a link to the "Getting Started with Atlas" tutorial? I'm not sure if it makes sense to plug that immediately after the registration link or after this blurb.
Thoughts @jeff-allen-mongo ?
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I think Corry's addition here after the registration blurb works.
* (DOCSP-17931): Added Atlas connection string note. * (DOCSP-17931): Incorporated Jeff's feedback. * (DOCSP-17931): Incorporated Jeff's feedback. * (DOCSP-17931): Incorporated JD's feedback.
* (DOCSP-17931): Added Atlas connection string note. * (DOCSP-17931): Incorporated Jeff's feedback. * (DOCSP-17931): Incorporated Jeff's feedback. * (DOCSP-17931): Incorporated JD's feedback.
@jdestefano-mongo, I added details to the following page about the Atlas UI providing the connection strings.
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